Score: 9

"great british humour"

submission: Edd Egg - Firemen

date: May 26, 2008

fluid animation, clear crisp voice-overs and quiet funny.
British humour is great! How about the old guy "sure i've aged but i've still got it(humps air"
what about that little punk short at the end?? ha.
Pay attention everyone this is an original idea to aspire to, not creating 1.3 second animation loops to a song.

Score: 10

"funny as!"

submission: Stress In The Workplace

date: May 25, 2008

I love the multiple paths heh.
I especially like the partwhere he rolls the magazine and hits the worker heh.
A series of this would be great! i'd like to see a construction site one.

"what should... BOB.... do?" i love the emphasis on the name heh.

Score: 3

"good till... there was no animation"

submission: Fantasy Pt. 1

date: May 24, 2008

awesome idea but its just a still shot with some music going on.
I thought it was going to be an actual movie... but alas. I was like nah my web is stuffing up so i reloaded it... twice... but nope. just a still.

3 stars in hope that you do something more with this.

Score: 7

"DK?"

submission: -Cannon Blaster-

date: May 24, 2008

Those of ya'll out there over 22 know where this is inspired from!
Well executed, some groovey stuff like jet packs, and has a difficulty curve.
solidly fun game, no suggestions for improvement. 4 and 7.

Score: 2

"still needs improving."

submission: Sniper Training

date: May 23, 2008

dont want to sound like an arsehole but it still needs improving.
Intro is great, although i would change it how if you shoot a target there it goes back to the main options. For some reason that really irritated me.
the real annoying thing is it seemed really unresponsive.
Your on the right track tho, i can see a good release once you polish it up and fix the damned responsiveness!

Score: 10

"out of the norm!"

submission: Real and tooon

date: May 23, 2008

i'm relatively new to NG, but I've never seen anything like this before on here!
Originality, humour (everyone loves seeing bunnies killed) and smarts (the skateboard was great!); what more do you need?
Suggestions are, you'll have to work on somehow compressing the file. Just wait for all the dial up wingers to winge about how the file is too big and its too short. Oh and the scene where you throw the tomato needs some tidying up, if you want to be pedantic about it.
Really looking to more releases similar to this. 10 and 5 material, no question.

Score: 8

"If only..,"

submission: Fitness&Fun with money

date: May 22, 2008

Great humour, basic but fluid and clean animation.
Grouse music as well.
I did feel like there was something missing tho... dunno why.

If only i had the money to do these things... heh.
Solid 8 and 4 material.

cant buy me loooooo - oooove... heh heh

Score: 6

"not bad not bad"

submission: Stick fight 1.5

date: May 22, 2008

nice fun little clip.
sometimes it went just a bit quick and it was hard to keep track of, and sometimes the animations overlaped causing me to think "huh whats going on here?"
The fire from the dragon was nice, and then little slow mo scene as it went into the dragon-ball Z like move was funky. Music was great!
Colour would most likely make the animation easier to keep track of. I know you can do better next time, but keep with it!

Score: 9

"what sniping should be"

submission: Tactical Assassin 2

date: May 21, 2008

Simply fantastic.
In your next release try maybe pumping up the difficulty a tad? And also adding some more "cinematics" to the story, make people wait to see the story unfold - although i do like the story in briefing.
Menial i know just my 2 cents worth for your next release mate.

I loved it hence my 9 and 5 i gave. I liked your previous release too, my favourite being the train level :-)

Score: 5

"rammstein is cool. Oh and flash..."

submission: A Lost City Pt. 1

date: May 19, 2008

gives a small inclination of some story thats building up but unless you read the author comments your like... huh?
Maybe some text in the actual flash when the story isnt so apparant may help. I can see a series being made of this, use all rammstein songs. Also cut the songs to fit with your clip so you dont attach the whole .mp3, and make it so it tapers off at the end (goes softer and quieter)
Not bad for a first effort, your skills can only improve. Looking forward to the next installment; I also hope you can take this as positive criticism and help you later on cos i'm not taking the mick out of you!